resume my friends please critique with the most harsh ways you can

[Hiwassee Angler]

Hello, my name is Caleb Luzader I am 12 years old and am a avid fisherman as just and avid outdoorsman. I run a 1988 Ranger with a 2003 150 h.p. Johnson outboard. Here is some things about me and what I would do for your company. I hope you take this application/resume/proposal into consideration.

I started fishing when I was about 2 years old with my dad fishing in a local pond, but just about 2 years ago I found my true passion for fishing. In January of 2007 I found the Cleveland Jr. Bassmasters it was almost like a dream come true. Tournaments for kids my age. That year I ended up finishing third in my age bracket. Now this year I received a boat for my "Easter Gift" or pretty much a family gift. Now almost every weekend I am either out on the lake or at a pond. So that was just a little about me now about what I can do for your company.

My goal for your company

My goal for your company is to boost sales, bring more customers,and help advertise your company. I will advertise your company by putting logos on cars, shirts,boats, using your company's name while speaking, and using your products in tournaments, when fishing,and when demonstrating 'how to' things.


My achievements and qualifications



Awards and Achievements

Ocoee Middle School 2007 to present

A and A,B Honor roll 2003 to present

Beta Club for honor students present

Completed D.A.R.E DRUG ABUSE RESISTENCE EDUCATION 2007

Third place overall standings in the Cleveland Jr. Bass Club 2007



Sports and extracurricular activities

OMS Band 2007 to present 6 grade

OMS Choir 2007 to present 6 grade

OMS football 2007 to present 6 grade

OMS wrestling 2007 6 grade

Cleveland Jr. fishing club 2007 to present



Community Service

Bradley Cleveland services camp for mentally handicapped 2007 to present

R.E.A.C.H. outreach First Baptist Church Youth Group 2006 to present

Coached Upward Basketball Team 2007

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania mission trip 2007

 

[ranman]

Not bad!I would add your upcoming planned events and how much, if any,miles per year you to travel.
Price your ads at a resonable rate also (it's easier to get a couple of hundies from several people than ten from one company!) and sell them on the fact that it's better than a one time type ad like a newspaper,yearbook, etc.
I just went through this with Ran-mini to fund his bmx racing this year and I've learned that results help out A-LOT
when your asking someone for their dough,but the person they are helping has to be someone that they like and believe in above all else.Good luck!


P.S. For those who are interested,and not to hijack the post, B-Rad is now ranked 18th in the ENTIRE country for his age group! .Dad is proud!
NAG POINTS THROUGH SUPER NATIONALS


Place Riders Points Hometown
Boys - Age 11
1 ALVIN PRIGETT JR get a profile 1133 PERRIS, CA
2 BROCK HEFFRON 1106 GILBERT, AZ
3 REID CAMPBELL 1068 MAGNOLIA, TX
4 WALKER FINCH 1026 FORT COLLINS, CO
5 KYLE MCARTHUR 824 SAN ANTONIO, TX
6 STEVE HARRIS 783 MORENO VALLEY, CA
7 MAX CIRELLO get a profile 741 COSTA MESA, CA
8 TAYLER ARTERBURN 708 CARTERVILLE, MO
9 AUSTIN BARRETTE 708 COTO DE CAZA, CA
10 RILEY BIERBACH 681 ARLINGTON, TX
11 TYLER KRENEK 660 YUKON, OK
12 JOHNNIE MCINTYRE 584 CREVE COUER, MO
13 JACOB CAMPBELL get a profile 530 MONTGOMERY, TX
14 MAKIEVA HOPSON 493 NORTH LAS VEGAS, NV
15 JOSHUA BANUELOS 491 MEDFORD, OR
16 DEREK WING get a profile 477 GARDNERVILLE, NV
17 SKY FINLEY 472 FRISCO, TX
18 BRAD LEWIS 421 CLEVELAND, TN
19 AUSTIN PALASOTA get a profile 394 ST PETERS, MO
20 COLLIN HUDSON 383 LONGMONT, CO

 

[Hiwassee Angler]

Thank you my resume is on my website I made so all my events are listed.

 

[fisherpal2k]

you have a p.m.

 

[Hiwassee Angler]

Thank you sir I posted you edited version on my website

 

[fisherpal2k]

  You'll do well. Just keep up the good work and don't get discouraged. Like ranman said, take it a little at a time and try to promote yourself in a positive way.</p>

 Smaller donations don't seem like much, but they go a long way in the long run.</p>